My first Narrative

The volcano that spits out gold

Once upon a time there were three girls.  The youngest one Lilly was the cutest.  The oldest one Tylah was the tallest and prettiest and I was the second oldest one. I wore tights and a blue and green strippy top.  Tylah always wore her cat ears, normal jeans, a black top and a pink wooly jumper.  Lilly wore a really pretty white dress with pink flowers and a beautiful pink head-band.  

One day Lilly, Tylah and I came across a beautiful pretty island full of flowers.  The island was beautiful but there was lots of danger on the island.  “What is that???” whispered Lily in a low voice. “It looks like a mountain,” explained Tylah. But it wasn't a mountain it was a volcano.  “Lets go and have a look,” I say.  “Gold!” shouts Tylah. GOLD??? “I don’t think this island is safe,” explained Tylah, “lets go.”  But when we went to move we couldn’t.  We were stuck in the middle of a sea of GOLD. “OMG,” And they lived happily ever after... THE END

Lindsay rally car co-driver
facts 
40 years ago she stared to drive 
she was a driver first before becoming a co-driver.
Her highest speed is 216 km p/hr.
She has only came first once.
She wears protective gear made of natural fibres.

tenses cameo

  Who is behind the hedge?

Is it…

a brown bunny rabbit digging deep, deep holes?

a little blue bird eating a pink worm?

a pretty rainbow butterfly flying?

an orange cute little kitten playing?

a nice helpful friend singing?

a playful  brown puppy playing?

We don’t know

Lets look!

Chromebook

BEEP BEEP BEEP rung the alarm-clock.   Yay! I yelled, “I’m finally going to get my chromebook.” When I arrived at school we all went for a swim.  Then it was time to get our chromebook.  We waited for the speeches. “It’s now time for the countdown,” Mrs H exclaimed. 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 BOOM BOOM BOOM!!!.  The timer went off. We ripped open our ribbon and opened the box. There was my perfect chromebook.  “This is going to be the best day ever,” I shouted.   

  

All about me

My name is Willow. I am 9 years old. I live in Parka. My favourite colons are blue and green.  My favourite food is macaroni cheese.  My favourite subject is writing.   I like to do ddf.   In my spare time I like to dance to music.