♥KIA ora everyone this past few weeks for learning we have been doing one sided arguments, one argument my teacher said would be a good thing to write about why its wrong to fight and I think that, that was a good thing to write about because you all know that it is wrong and i'm sure you would like to read my argument there are my reasons.

Writing Term One         Name: Will☯w

Persuasive Writing

Prompt: Is it wrong to fight?

We are learning to: tell my opinion and write my opinion

Brainstorm ideas:  I think It is wrong to fight because it can end up in many different ways, ways that might hurt you or even contain loses.

I believe that it is wrong to fight why? you might ask well, fighting can be caused by anything but it is mainly to defend someone or yourself but sometimes other people could die (what!) oh you did not know that well read the reasons and im sure you would agree. firstly  I believe it is wrong to fight because someone could get knocked out unconscious and die or they could get very injured even though you might just be doing it for fun. Secondly If you fight your not cool your won't impress anyone by starting fight your not Joseph parker so keep your hands to yourself. Finally you might even get hurt yourself you never know, you  could See someone weak and say “ Oh there smaller and weaker than me so id I pick a fight with that person than I will win” well you're probably wrong if you try pick a fight with someone weaker and smaller than you they might actually be good at defending yourself they might have friends that are stronger and tougher that you are. So i'm sure that you will totally agree to keep your hands to yourself and treat people the way you want to be treated.  Fighting is wrong and you all know it so next time you think your going to pick a fight I would think if I were you.