Kia ora this week we have been learning about personification. Personification is when your writing a descriptive sentence of what something would do with out using the word an or like.
- The Sneakers where so tired by along day of running in the school triathlon.
- The alarm clock yelled to the girl saying “GET UP IT'S SEVEN AM GET UP GET UP”….
- The Stop sign scolded the car for driving past a red light.
- The Eggs were sweating nervously when they saw the hot flames heating up the pan.
- The piano sang gracefully every time the girl tickled the keys.
- The moon howled in the night sky
Kia Ora, my name is Aja-Marie and I am from Waima School. I really liked how you emphasised this piece of writing and that you use very useful words. Your vocab is great and I liked how you had a bit of punctuation. It is human like, like the piano and sneakers are alive.
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Kia Ora I am from Waima School and I really liked your post what i liked about your post was your great vocabulary and I liked that you had punctuation and I really liked that you had your own story and you told it well and I liked that you collaboration in this story.
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