Kia ore everyone
this week we have been writing sentences using our senses. Here is mine.
The abandoned hospital - By Willow
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I took one through the door and then immediately I had shivers down my spine.It looked like it could have been used in a horror movie scene and was so dusty and horrid it was a monstrosity. The air smelt rotten, stale, moldy and so repulsive that I could hardly breathe. As I approached the bed a strong smell of stinky socks filled my nose.
I wandered further into the depths of the deep dark hospital I could swear I heard whispers flowing through the air and I suddenly had a strange feeling that someone or something was following me.
Kia ora Willow,
ReplyDeleteYour last sentence makes me want to read more - what's going to happen next?! You used lots of great adjectives to describe the photo.
Don't forget to proofread your writing - you took one what through the door?
Miss M